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Ick

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Literature Text

The Yuck bubbles sickly in me,
icky sticky clinging within,
troubles inside thin and tacky,
icky sticky under my skin,
bubbling churning stirring restless,
whirling sickness dizzy spinning,
twirling exhausting pestilence,
violent groaning whirlpool hurling,
stormy tempest overpowers me,
sickly sensation burns,
yucky icky,
emerges,
pops.
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SimonWBeresford's avatar
I was enjoying this until "pops" it's a bit of a lackluster ending. If you want to keep the idea pretty much the same you could change it to explodes. Just a suggestion.